Posts : 100 Join date : 2014-07-02 Age : 31 Location : St. Louis
Subject: The Debut of Dave Turner (July 10th) Thu Jul 10, 2014 7:41 pm
As the exciting match between Booker T and Manic comes to a finish, the young up and coming prospect Dave Turner calmly waits in gorilla position backstage
Cole: What a match between Booker and Manic! Coming up, it'll be Wade Barrett vs Dave Turner as the action rolls on!
Taz: Boy, I can't wait for this one! A real knock down, drag out, fight coming up!
Impact cuts to commercial as Dave Turner starts his warm up stretches and jogging in place. A worn out Manic returns from the stage to gorilla position and accidently bumps into a focused Dave Turner. Turner stops and looks around to a passing Manic who didn't even realize what had happened
Turner: Hey! Freakshow! What the hell do you think you're doing?
Manic looks confused as he stops and looks at Turner
Turner: This must be amatuer hour! I'm over here trying to get ready for my match in a couple of minutes, and this scuzzy looking garbage just walks around like he owns the place
Manic still not quite sure why he is being verbally attacked, starts to speak but is cut off by Turner
Turner: Oh spare me the trash you're about to spew! I'm a purebred all-star, about to make it big and I've got to deal with people like you? Let me give you some advice Manic....stay the hell away from me or you'll never see the Impact ring again
Manic begins to walk away unsure of the situation, Turner mumbles some stuff to himself as he jobs in place and is seconds away from hitting the stage for the first time in his young career
The first few notes hit as Turner waits at the curtain, then as the drums come crashing in, he emerges, bouncing around and ready to go
(Promo closed, feedback please)
MercilessEarth Main Eventer
Posts : 158 Join date : 2014-07-02 Location : Streets of Vancouver
Subject: Re: The Debut of Dave Turner (July 10th) Thu Jul 10, 2014 8:02 pm
good establishing, quick promo to start off Dave Turner's cocky bluechipper persona. Manic isn't gonna take this lying down though, rest assured!
Matt Wall Main Eventer
Posts : 159 Join date : 2014-07-09 Age : 35 Location : Saskatchewan, Canada
Subject: Re: The Debut of Dave Turner (July 10th) Thu Jul 10, 2014 8:06 pm
I love how quickly we're getting drama going in this league. Turner/Manic, Wall/Wyatt... what's next?
DullAmbrose Main Eventer
Posts : 101 Join date : 2014-07-06
Subject: Re: The Debut of Dave Turner (July 10th) Sun Jul 13, 2014 2:33 am
Yeah, I like the intensity of this character. Reminds me a bit of Kurt Angle or Lance Storm. The feud between these two characters should be a great one. Nice job man.